The clean energy sector has a communications problem. Not a shortage of passion — there is plenty of that. Not a shortage of genuinely important work being done — the projects, the technologies, the partnerships being forged across Africa and the UK are often remarkable. The problem is that too much of this work is being communicated in ways that do not reach the people who need to hear it.
Investors who could fund the next phase. Partners who could open the right doors. Journalists who could bring the story to a wider audience. Policymakers who could create a more enabling environment. These audiences exist, they are paying attention, and most clean energy founders are not speaking to them effectively.
Having spent years managing communications across some of Africa's largest telecoms and financial inclusion programmes, and more recently working with technology and impact organisations in the UK, I have seen the same patterns repeat. Here are the ones that cost founders the most.
Talking about the technology instead of the problem
This is the most common mistake, and it is an understandable one. Founders are close to their technology. They have spent years developing it, refining it, and understanding it in ways that very few other people do. That depth of knowledge is an asset — but in communications, it can become a trap.
When a founder leads with technology, the investor hears complexity. When they lead with the problem being solved, the investor hears opportunity. These are very different reactions, and they lead to very different conversations.
Nobody invests in a technology. They invest in a future where a problem is solved. Your communications should start there.
The shift is not complicated but it requires discipline. Before describing what your technology does, describe what the world looks like without it and what it looks like with it. Make that gap vivid and real. Then explain how your technology closes it.
Underestimating the investor narrative
Clean energy investment has grown significantly, but the competition for capital has grown alongside it. Investors in this space are increasingly sophisticated and increasingly focused on specific criteria: clear market opportunity, credible team, measurable impact, and a narrative that holds together under scrutiny.
That last point matters more than most founders realise. An investor does not just assess the business. They assess whether they can confidently represent this business to their own stakeholders — their LPs, their board, their peers. If your narrative is unclear or inconsistent, it creates a problem for them that they will solve by passing on your deal.
The investor-grade narrative is not the same as your pitch deck. It is the story that sits behind the deck — the one that answers the hard questions before they are asked, that acknowledges the risks and explains why they are manageable, and that makes the opportunity feel both urgent and achievable. Getting this right before you start fundraising conversations is one of the highest-return communications investments a founder can make.
Treating media as an afterthought
Earned media — coverage in publications your stakeholders actually read — builds a form of credibility that no amount of self-published content can replicate. A profile in a respected energy publication, a mention in a climate finance briefing, a quote in a piece about the future of African infrastructure: these signals travel into rooms you cannot enter yourself.
Most founders engage with media reactively, when they have something to announce. The founders who build the strongest media relationships do it proactively, long before they need coverage. They become a source for journalists covering their space. They offer comment on industry developments. They write thought leadership that gets picked up and shared. By the time they have a major announcement to make, they already have relationships with the journalists who matter.
This takes time. It is one of the most compelling arguments for starting your communications work earlier than feels necessary.
Inconsistency across channels
A founder can give a compelling in-person pitch, have a LinkedIn profile that tells a completely different story, and a website that seems to describe a third company entirely. This happens more often than you might think, and it creates a specific kind of doubt in the minds of the people you most want to impress.
Before a serious investor, partner or journalist engages with you, they will look you up. They will read your LinkedIn profile, visit your website, search for coverage of your company, and form an impression before you have said a word. If what they find is inconsistent with what you told them, the gap becomes a question they are unlikely to ask but very likely to act on.
The fix is not complicated but it requires a deliberate audit. Your narrative should be consistent — not identical, channels have different registers — but aligned. The same core story, told in the appropriate voice for each context.
What good communications actually unlocks
I want to be clear about what I am arguing for. This is not about making clean energy founders better at self-promotion. It is about ensuring that genuinely important work gets the attention, capital and partnerships it deserves.
The energy transition is real and urgent. The founders working on it, particularly those building solutions for African markets where energy access remains a fundamental challenge, are doing work that matters. The gap between the quality of that work and the quality of the communications around it is one of the most fixable problems in the sector.
Fixing it starts with treating communications as a discipline rather than a task — something that requires the same rigour, the same iteration, and the same senior attention as the technical work itself.
Story in Motion works with clean energy and technology founders to build investor-grade narratives and communications that open doors. Book a free 20-minute audit call.